Ike's Top G.M. - ID# 282

Eisenhower

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

A group of contestants compete to become the next G.M.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 11:50 am - Voiceover is strong! Music is dramatic and works well for the tone of the video. The trailer is short--I would have liked to see more visuals of the students "batting." What are the competitions? Interview composition changes--the first is positioned using the rule of thirds and the young woman is more towards the middle of the screen--keep it consistent.
• 3/5 10:14 pm - The voice over narration was strong and the overall shots, broll and contestant dialogue made it feel like an accurate teaser for a reality show. The voice over was only coming out of the left part of the mix. Make sure you put that in stereo! The music cue needed to be more dynamic. You're creating an action-packed drama to determine a contest. The music needs to match that action!

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