HF Is The Fit - ID# 283

Homewood-Flossmoor

School Promotion

Entry Description

Showcases HF High School.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 5:18 pm - Nice exterior opening, but camera movement & zoom needs to be a bit smoother. Shoot multiple takes. Great closing student shots with them stating their career paths, to close out that section. Audio levels are uneven between VO & interviews. Shaky camera at times--use a tripod. Choir breaks the 4th wall. Closing shots of empty facilities are a bookend to the opening, but it's a weak solution and takes the air out of the story. It doesn't show that HF is all about the people and the opportunities HF provides, which would be a better closing after the story you've built up.

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