GHS School Promo - ID# 291

Geneva

School Promotion

Entry Description

This video will show you everything on what goes on at Geneva Community High School.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 1:16 pm - If this is supposed to be everything at Geneva, it is very heavy on athletics. Overall cinematography is very good, and the editing selection shows good shot variety. Retiming of FB team doesn’t work; random natural audio in places is distracting. The three random "video shooting & editing" clips don't fit in with the rest of the story. The student activity at a table(?) is confusing--not sure what story that is trying to tell, and doesn't work with a fast-paced piece like this. Would have been better to stick with fall athletics and marching band highlights. Identify the focus for your story. Then pick a music bed that works for the whole story.
• 3/6 3:21 pm - There needed to be a bit more variety of what was being shown on the screen. There was a lot of athletics, and a few activities. The whole musical/arts department wasn't shown at all except for when the band was on the football field or during the football game.

Judge 1

Positives: -The camera settings produced a fine picture and the shots were largely framed well. -Camera catches, I think, what is intended. Action, excitement, fun, community.

Improvements: -I'm not sure if I can judge sound in this piece. It wasn't bad, just absent but for the music. -No discernible story, and I'm not entirely sure what the promo is for. Is it the school, the sports, the activities as a whole, etc?

Judge 2

Positives: the camera shots were nicely stabilized, the music and pace of the video worked nicely.

Improvements: shorten the video and pic the best shots, some shots were repetitive. use a nicer font for the outro

Judge 3

Positives: Good editing to the beat good camera work good sound

Improvements: too heavy on sports , would have liked more variety of academics.

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