The Barrington Football Family - ID# 292

Barrington

School Promotion

Entry Description

At BHS, our football team is more than just the players. Our football team represents our school and our community. This video explains the special relationship we as a school share with our team.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 1:39 pm - Great story-- creative connections within your school community to show the concept of family. Team slow-mo is blurry (frame rate issues?). The voiceover content and tone increases the impact of the piece. Solid editing. The music bed is holding this video back a bit. It has no build or resolution, and fades out randomly at the end.
• 3/6 3:14 pm - This is a beautifully well done school promotion to set the tone of family for the football team. The voice over truly shares the message that matches the cinematography. Well done.

Judge 1

Positives: -Opening shots set the stage well to compile the viewer. -The edit is simple. Complexity is worked into the shot rather than shoehorned into the cut. This is good. -Run-and-gun shots are largely shaded and framed well.

Improvements: -The 'camera crew' shots are the only photos in the piece. It's a break from the feel of the rest of the piece. -VO could have been directed with a pronounced build in intensity. -Mix levels adequate, but hold place. Not used to aid the feel of the piece. Not really a negative, more of a missed opportunity.

Judge 2

Positives: the shots at sunrise were beautiful. the voice over was super clear. nice use of a drone.

Improvements: some of the shots were under exposed. use a form of stabilization

Judge 3

Positives: nice use of time lapse in the beginning liked the story!

Improvements: Could have had a stronger ending Could have been a little more upbeat

Judge 4

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