A couple in love and the girl is going away to college. They are both heartbroken because of the separation.
Positives: Story was easy to follow and scene cuts work well with the music, especially during the "flashback" near the end. Also, color grading seemed excellent in most of the shots.
Improvements: Some of the shots could have used stabilization, especially the closing clip with the balloon flying away. It will give your work an added element of professionalism.
Positives: Very nicely done story with music as narrative. Nice music selection. Good acting.
Improvements: Some shots needed a bit more work.
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