Fantasy Baseball: A Documentary - ID# 300

Neuqua Valley

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

A soulful piece touching on twelve close friends deeply entrenched in a fantasy baseball league. Fierce rivalry gives way to lifetime friendships, and competition fuels fun. This is fantasy baseball.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/27 5:13 pm - Good use of voice-overs. Good use of interviews of subjects/players to draw in the viewers. Good use of audio at the end to close out the trailer.
• 3/22 7:43 am - The various shots are edited together well and clearly give a brief summary of what’s to come. Shots are well framed a good portion of the time, however, some of the interviewees have little head room. Lighting and sound are level throughout.
• 3/6 2:45 pm - The camera work and shot composition for the b-roll was very strong in trailer. The interviews shots could have use some lighting design. The editing allowed the piece to flow nicely. The sound needs work: The interviews had a lot static and, at times, was competing with the music because the music level was too high. A little tweaking and audio sweetening could strengthen this project.

Judge 1

Positives: Very good lighting and camera angles Good editing and voice over

Improvements: - Is there a particular point of view the documentary is trying to sell? try to bring that out in the trailer more.

Judge 2

Positives: Good use of found footage and creating the idea of tons of stats. Great edit.

Improvements: The production value of some of the shots wasn't as strong as well as the quality of some of the computer charts and graphics.

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