Distracted Driving - ID# 318

Crown Point

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Public Service Announcement for distracted driving.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/27 1:33 pm - Great original audio throughout the video with a great message. Text appears quickly but works well with the voiceover. Nice edit especially in the details of the last scene. Camera shots work well. Great video.
• 3/5 3:31 pm - This was very well done. Some great shots and transitions in it. Really powerful at the end. The only issue I had was the quality of the voice over recording and diction- it was a bit tough to understand at times.
• 3/2 8:55 am - It's hard to get steady shots in the car- good job keeping steady. Script is very catchy because of the poem. Really enjoyed watching it.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice rhyme and rhythm. Great shots, good choices.

Improvements: A bit too frontal of light on subject driving. Annoying as all with the constant flashing. Use more sparingly, and build it up at the end, not at same rate. Jaws built up the sound of the shark as danger approaches, do the same.

Judge 2

Positives: Really nice lighting and camera work overall.

Improvements: Some of the red color correction and sparks effects at the crash were a little distracting, compared to the rest of the lighting which seemed so natural.

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