Presidential Inauguration - ID# 319
Crown Point
News Package
Entry Description
CPTV’s Payton Belcher covers the events surrounding the inauguration and interviews students and staff on their views on the presidential inauguration.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/7 10:38 am - The package was written very well. The matches of the audio with the visuals made this package effective. There were two side of this story presented but very quickly. I wish you would have adding something to separate the main points of the story and break up the soundbites at the end. Footage was creatively edited. The interviews shots were too close and did not work for the emotion of this story.
- 3/5 2:51 pm - A very well written voice over and report. Great details that are engaging and concise. Good use of b-roll throughout. The shot of Dan Hadary is a little close, especially with that type of lower-third text. I would back it out a little bit or swap out the lower-third for a thinner one that doesn't cut off his chin. Sound bites add to the story -- a solid variety of thoughts and opinions.
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