The Hype: No Place Like Home Promo - ID# 328

Crown Point

Commercial

Entry Description

A :30 commercial promoting the airing of a documentary on a broadcast of CPTV.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 8:47 am - Good edits to the pace of music. Nice shots. Music has a nice beat but the lyrics don't really match your theme.
• 2/27 2:42 pm - Great edits with music Great slow motion Great hype Words to music Government Gods doesn't really fit maybe some in-game action shots

Judge 1

Positives: Nice camera work - appreciate the varied film speeds, with a nice variety of camera angles that feel Nice edit - it flows with the music's tempo and evokes emotion in the viewer.

Improvements: Unfortunately it's not clear what is being advertised.

Judge 2

Positives: Good audio editing to get the 30 seconds exactly. Really solid video editing with the cuts on the beats. Color treatment is nice. I particularly liked the shots at :06 and :18...I think some more creative angles like these could strengthen the piece. A shot from the audience (the "home") of the jump ball or something like that.

Improvements: The story I didn't quite understand in the 30 seconds. Maybe adding in some descriptive single words along the way to help me know what the documentary will show/tell me. "There's" - "No" - "Place" -"Like" - "Home" as it builds, maybe they're revealed behind parts of the shot and they show up...some After Effects work there. :11 the one shot of the other team...seems like it shouldn't have been in there.

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