Mental Illness PSA - ID# 33

Batavia

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

A young boy is harassed for his mental disability.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 9:23 pm - Good concept but needs to be explained further. Pacing is a bit slow and more could have been done incorporating natural sound. Too many medium and wide shots.
• 3/4 2:49 pm - Nice shots and started off strong. I was expecting something more at the end. I understand why you did the quick cuts with the sandwich at the end to show the person's invisible friend, but it seemed like there should have been something different or more at the end. Good audio and nat. sound. . Graphic should have been up longer.

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