4/27 12:54 pm - Simple, but powerful message. The text was clear and concise. There is (unintentional?) movement in the background in the first frames of the video.
3/5 2:59 pm - Some nice use of powerful voice over and facts. The shots were powerful, but the shot of the hand either had a focus effect added to it- it worked and was a nice addition but seemed inconsistent to the rest of the shots. Perhaps do this for all of the shots? Short but powerful.
3/1 12:28 pm - Powerful. Need better connection of eyeglasses from the hand it's falling out from. Liked the graphic at the end.