Sexual Assault PSA - ID# 34

Batavia

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

PSA raising awareness about sexual assault.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 9:24 pm - Great concept that was executed very well. Voice over was powerful and imagery was subtle and effective. Point comes across clearly and with great impact. Hold your graphics up a bit longer.
• 3/4 2:54 pm - The audio does not match the images, or was even close. This causes the viewer to get distracted and say, "Huh? What?" and miss the message. Graphics should have been up for a few seconds more. Good camera work.

Judge 1

Positives: Narration works well

Improvements: Could use some music under the narration

Judge 2

Positives: simple and effective

Improvements: was it too simple? could there have been some juxtapositions between how she interpreted things and the reality you want to convey? like quick cuts to the assault, or to how she pictres herself at that moment?

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