Catfish PSA - ID# 344

Maine South

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

A Public Service Announcement warning you about the dangers of meeting people online.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 9:09 pm - Very well shot and edited. Drama builds throughout. The climax is a bit strange with the guy just reaching out of a car window but overall an effective piece.
• 3/3 1:49 pm - Good message. The guy at the end could use a little refinement. He comes forward to the door and an open window. The door stops him. I know because we see him stop at it. Maybe have him go out of the door opening or cut the video a little sooner.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice job making the creep seem creepy

Improvements: The music was okay. Something a little more ominous maybe

Judge 2

Positives: Nicely shot - good camera moves and color.

Improvements: The ending seemed a little strange; seems like she would have just run away when she saw him. It might have felt more real if she saw him and ran instead of the dramatic POV shot.

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