Spring Weather - ID# 340

Homewood-Flossmoor

News Package

Entry Description

A report on the warm winter weather

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 11:24 am - Story was informative however the music was distracting from the message. The footage enhanced the story matching the audio. Interviews were questionable as far as credibility of your sources. What is an environmental enthusiast? What are Katie Huffman's credentials for giving advice. Had you interviewed or explained the credentials of the interviewees it would have been more effective. The wind was an issue at certain parts of the package. The reporter did a great job communicating the information.
• 3/5 3:47 pm - Very informative and a great, timely story to cover. The reporter did a great job of presenting the story. The interviews were a little quiet. The first interview could have been shot in a better location or different time. The music could have been lowered during the interviews -- it was a little distracting when trying to hear responses. Since we had footage from the beach, it would have been great if we could have seen some responses from the public to the odd weather.

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