Big Brother - ID# 354

Homewood-Flossmoor

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

In case you don't like the government watching you...

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/27 12:24 pm - This video keeps you guessing until the end! The song choice was great. The use of camera shots was well executed. It could be a little more informational at the end but overall great video!
• 3/5 2:35 pm - This was well done and the suspense built until the end. Shots were creative. While the suspense was appreciated and understood, it would have been interesting to see the information come in a bit sooner. It felt as if we were left trying to figure it all out until the end- again- a great concept, but maybe a little sooner. The info at the end could be up longer or have more information so we know more about it. We did go to the website...it seems a bit...conspiracy theorist. However, that doesn't change the quality of the video.
• 3/1 11:47 am - Very creative! I loved the "surprise factor" of government surveillance at the end. It kept audiences attention and kept them thinking, "What is this about...?" Great job. I would just make ending with information a little longer so audience can read through it fully.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice camera work and variety of shots

Improvements: The effect of the video blinking was kind of confusing. At first I was confused as to whether it was intentional or a glitch

Judge 2

Positives: Nice, important, interestingly shown. Black flashing effect is solidly used - maybe too much? What about bug under glass feel? Microscope with the cold shoulder? Very nice!

Improvements: Needs more of a build up. More crescendo. Show something being seen that no one should be privy too.

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