NEGATIVE - ID# 364

Wauconda Community High School

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

NEGATIVE Movie Trailer

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 11:04 am - The story for this trailer is unclear. I understand that the main character has special powers but beyond that I do not understand what they are. Audio is not clear--record audio on an external device instead of using camera audio. Camerawork is adequate--some shaky shots. Interesting use of color but I am not exactly sure of the purpose. Fun music choice!
• 3/6 4:47 pm - Interesting story and twist on a comic/anti-superhero genre. The story of the trailer needed more structure. In addition to the footage of the protagonist zapping people, I wanted to hear more from him on his discovery of his power, what it means, and why I, as a viewer should root for him. The action stuff was fine, but it needed a bit more substance in story. Work on making your shots more active, so when you cut quickly to them your talent is already moving and in the action, instead of waiting for "action."

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