Dorritos Better - ID# 372
Wauconda Community High School
Commercial
Entry Description
Doritos Commercials
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/27 6:55 am - Good concept. First shot - camera was bumped - re-do it to get a smoother shot. Watch your audio levels when editing - they were low.
- 3/6 8:19 pm - I like the concept of eating the food and people liking someone or them becoming popular. Watch for the shaky shot in the start of the commercial, and it continues during the commercial. Towards the end of the commercial I can see a slight overlay. I am not sure if that is intentional or it was just left behind, If it was intentional make it a little bit clearer. I think that you can you a different angle when it comes to eating the chips and that will help transition the viewer to something new happening even more. Overall good job.
- 3/5 10:42 am - I think this was a fun idea, but much of it looked really staged. I would have loved to see you try and do more with the time you had and develop your character better as a loser, that way when good things happen it will have more of an impact. Showing some reaction shots would have also helped - an element of surprise or confusion when the girl suddenly appears which you did but it was on a wide shot, give me a close up of his face, then a shot of his hand reaching into the bag for another chip (so he can get more). Also I would have loved to hear more authentic sounds like the chips crunching, the bag crinkling etc. Your music at the ends seems to cut off at an awkward point try splicing so the end of the song ends when the video ends. I liked the idea and you are on your way to making a masterpiece, don’t be afraid to try it again ☺
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