Clean Up After Yourself - ID# 389

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Entry Description

A brief video highlighting the importance of keeping a clean workspace.

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/27 1:20 pm - The slow pull into the frame works well, but a couple variances in framing would be impactful. Watch your export as there is an unnecessary 13 seconds of black at the end of the video.
  • 3/5 3:23 pm - This was a fun idea, but it did make me wonder if you really need a PSA to clean up after yourself. Regardless, the video was fun, but it seemed a bit one note. The same simple camera angle was effective at first, but after awhile it got a bit tiring. It would have been nice to see a real time lapse if you were going to stick on one shot- maybe turn the coffee pot on, have it brew, have her eating and bringing more things out of her back, then speed it up. It would take a while to shoot, but might be more interesting.
  • 3/2 11:28 am - Good idea but more camera angles would have made this more interesting.
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