Animal Abuse PSA - ID# 394

Wauconda Community High School

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

All a dog wants is the attention of its owner.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 9:21 pm - Strong concept executed quite well. Good use of voiceover and effective music track. Graphic at the end and timing were strong, some graphics were too short though, hard to read. Other areas of improvement would be more shots and better lighting.
• 3/4 2:34 pm - At first I was not sure who was talking. White balance is off in some shots. Pan on sofa is sticky and the autofocus makes shot out of focus. Graphics are not up long enough to read.

Judge 1

Positives: The narration of the puppy is effective

Improvements: I'd like to see more variety of camera shots and angles

Judge 2

Positives: nice idea to give a voice to the dog.

Improvements: more camera angles and cuts would help. slowly sinking supers at the end are an odd choice.

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