A New Beginning - ID# 393

York

Documentary

Entry Description

Living with Type 1 diabetes is much different than most people think. This documentary shows the challenges and hardships Type 1 diabetes has on one's life.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/28 5:27 am - Opens up feeling more like a PSA. Understand what you’re trying to do with eye contact on interviews but that causes discomfort to your audience, plus – if you are going to put yourself center frame be sure you are actually in the center of the frame, not great quality audio on Carlos – echo in and out, not great color on interview with Carlos, great hospital/emergency broll, volleyball broll is only widescreen footage, don’t shoot interview with mirror backdrop – confuses audience, sloppy
• 4/9 2:42 pm - Good shots and B-roll. Having two different versions of the onset was really good. Music works well. Transitions match well to changes in the story. I liked the title information near the end showing ratio of Type 1 to all forms.

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