Hall of Fame - ID# 411

Neuqua Valley

News Package

Entry Description

This was a news package done on Neuqua's second Hall of Fame induction ceremony honoring two athletes, one team, and a former principal. I interviewed each of the inductees before the ceremony and filmed the ceremony itself.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 11:18 am - Good use of archival footage to enhance the story. Choice of soundbites used are questionable as they don't really tell the emotion of the story. Use of natural sound was effective. The back to back to back sound bites could have been broken up with a voice over.
• 3/5 3:44 pm - Great use of previous footage to showcase the inductees. Interviews are well shot and capture emotions of hall of fame inductees. Great variety of responses. The story is edited well. The only thing this piece lacks is an emotional twist, something that makes this particular induction special or unique.

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