This is a video on how to make a christmas tree out of star shaped Rice Krispy Treats. In the video you see and hear step by step instructions to make the teats and how to assemble the final product.
Positives: Good graphics with props for ingredients and equipment. Goo music.
Improvements: Ended abruptly. Some long shots made it hard to see what was going on. Felt rushed.
Positives: The setting was fun to look at. It was clearly a Christmas themed demo. The lay out of what one would need to make the tree was clear
Improvements: The ending was abrupt. I think there could have been an extra beat...displaying of the tree or eating of the tree. Was the microphone in the beginning necessary? The lighting was a bit dark.
Positives: This is a very upbeat piece. Excellent art direction in the opening sequence. The decorations in the foreground and on the stove really set the tone for the rest of the piece. The text was easy to read supported the feel of your piece.
Improvements: Your project ends too abruptly. Show off the completed tree at the end. The instant you finish talking the music and picture fade out. Let your video run for a few seconds after the voice track ends. Then fade out the music and video.
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