Kardasis Self Documentary - ID# 43

Glenbrook North

Documentary

Entry Description

As part of our class we had to produce self-documentaries. This is my story of myself, which was certainly odd to think about. Overall it was a fun experience. I didn't have the original files anymore so it appears as if it is over 5:00, but the video itself is 4:57 (without credits).

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/28 5:20 am - Framing of interviews is poor, inconsistent audio on interviews, uncomfortable eye contact with camera during interviews, don’t reuse broll
• 4/27 8:19 pm - Too much empty space upper/left at 0:35. Find a more unique spot for main subject's interview to set it off more from supporting subjects' interviews - maybe put main subject outside and all others inside. These are cute, fun pieces, but they don't inherently produce emotional connections like some of your competitors. Technically well-produced.
• 4/9 2:51 pm - Great shots, especially of the piano and the swing set. Good editing. Interviews lit and shot well.

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