March: Episode 3 - ID# 439

Riverside Brookfield

Documentary

Entry Description

In this episode of March, producer Lisandro Resto follows the Riverside Brookfield High School marching band to Lincoln Square for their performance at the Von Steuben Day Parade.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/28 5:28 am - Nice opener, like your graphics and pop-ups to support your other content, do not care for eye contact on interview – give it breathing room, great depth of field on interview, missing lower thirds on all interviews, great broll from actual parade, second interview is trapped with its frame and eye contact going opposite of breathing room, I like how you let nat sound drive the story but there may be too much at times, audio on last interview was framed properly but poor audio, abrupt ending
• 4/26 6:12 pm - Had some nice shots of the band, both on the field and in closer quarters on the street. Good explanations from the Drum Major contrasting parade and field marching and talking about the slinky effect. Cutting from the first mention of the parade back to the field practice seemed a little out of sequence until the explanation came along. Then it made sense.

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