Remembering Mr. M - ID# 443

Maine South

Natural Audio News Package

Entry Description

Natural Sound News Project about former Maine South and Maine East art teacher, Mr. M.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/15 3:17 pm - Love the headroom being wrong. Good graphics easy to read and up long enough to read. Exposure on one interview too dark. Good story Good use of photos. Nice movement during the photos.
• 3/7 11:31 am - Nice remembrance of a well regarded teacher. The viewer does get a nice sketch of this teacher's personality. There were technical problems though. Interviews framing is too loose. Poorly lit second interview,. Title at the end a little too short. Left questions, why or how did he die?
• 3/1 4:08 pm - Watch the head room on your interviews. make sure that you circle your audio so that it comes out of both speakers for the first interviewee. I like the movement of the pictures for your packages. Watch the lighting on the second interview it is a little dark. You do a nice job of telling his story, and why was important to the school. I wish you had some current students who talked about him, and his impact on them.

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