Reinecke - ID# 455

Geneva

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Local documentarian investigates the mysterious happenings involving a local urban legend.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/27 4:35 pm - The cinematography in your piece certainly is above average. Daytime shots are colorful and well exposed, and you should be particularly proud of the night shots. Continue to work on the way in which you develop your characters and the narrative. How might you have shown more growth in the protagonist as she struggles to investigate this story? Also, how might you have made the outcome of this story a little less predictable?
• 3/7 9:03 am - Talks too fast in beginning. Nice cameo by mayor.
• 3/4 12:57 pm - Great use of numerous locations. Good acting at the end when in woods. Great inclusion of other actors. Great wind effect in the library. I love that she actually went to do research in the library. Ending is a bit obvious, given long history of Blair-Witch-style films. But it is effective!

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