Off The Grid - ID# 459

Maine West

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

When millennials get their technology taken away, they face a taste of what reality really is. In this horror parody, students react in utter chaos when their teacher takes them "Off The Grid."

Recent Teacher Comments

• 2/28 10:03 am - I think you have makings of solid story here. It ends up feeling underdeveloped because there’s no explanation of what going off the grid actually does to the kids other than make them scream and run around. A good variety of shot compositions and angles. Editing generally flows acceptably well. No big jump cuts. Lighting is spotty. Audio is okay but nothing special. A decent overall effort but not likely to stand out in a competitive venue like MMEA.

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