Stay With Me (Original Song) - ID# 465
Maine West
Music Video
Entry Description
This video is about a girl who has had her heart broken and is now going to all the places they spent time together. This is an original song written by Phoebe Kohl and with the original piano arrangement by Dan Nach.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/6 7:53 pm - Audio recording had audio issues- not a clear, good recording of vocals. The use of video effects got overdone- continued to use the mirror effect for almost every shot. The effect on the singer made watching the lips difficult. Have a purpose for the effects- don't just use them because they look cool- they should have a reason. It was a nice original song- well written! Actress did a nice job of showing emotion. Not real sure what the story was about- saw a lot of shots, and objects- might have made more sense if there was video of what took place there to get a better visual image. Never make the audience have to assume something- spell it out so we know what's going on at all times. Lots of potential in this video!
- 2/28 12:45 pm - Good use of an original song and a variety of shots. Good use of the distortion on the singer to create visual interest.
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