Molly's Cupcakes - ID# 488

Maine East

Commercial

Entry Description

Molly's Cupcakes located on Clark Street in Chicago offers a unique and friendly twist on cupcakes and baked goods.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 8:20 am - Opening was very good and grabs your attention right away. We needed a mic for talent so the background noise doesn't interfere with your message. Good choice of music. Might have been better with voiceover as well as with talent interview to feel more like a commercial
• 3/5 11:45 pm - Catchy intro. The background audio is so high it is very distracting. The talent is off mic and seems to ramble on without a clear objective. The script needs to be tighter and more focused. Great B-roll.
• 2/27 1:28 pm - Nice intro as it caught viewers eye Audio could be better Script could be stronger perhaps better as a 30 second rather that 60 second

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