MMEA Fest

A woman trying to get away with something. Does she?

3/3 2:37 pm - Great start with picture turning into video- nice job. Actor looks at the camera accidently at times. Lighting was inconsistent- especially in the library scenes. Too much "talk"- the actors are talking to each other, and we have no idea what they are saying. Try not to use so much "talk" so we don't have to decipher what they are saying. Good swing edit in the library. The story was good- fun to follow and anticipate. Really concentrate on lighting- it's quite dark in the bedroom scene too. Could the video have had an even greater impact if there was someone singing the song? Overall, it was a good video with a catchy ending.
2/28 12:25 pm - It looks like you had fun making the video. I like the transition from to the camera phone and scene change. A suggestion would be to transition from the close up of the eye to another circular object (for example the sun). Interesting ending.

Positives: Really nice transition with the transition on the 360 pans. Very impressive. The story was well done and held my interest.

Improvements: Lighting was inconsistent, especially in the library scenes.

Positives: Good shots and nice job editing.

Improvements: Story was hard to follow and music didn't support it very well.

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