Taylor Story - ID# 490

Oswego

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Entry Description

Taylor and her family tell their story.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/5 2:03 pm - This was too long for this category. Use an external mic. We are hearing too much background noise. We hear a lot of audio cuts (clicks). There are many jumpcuts. Hide them with b-roll. Instead of the lightning fast shots at the end, add them over the talking heads (and edits). Why the dip to blacks? Too many of them for one story. Reporter's audio very low at the end and sounded rushed.
• 2/27 11:41 am - This story is too long. It didn't meet the MMEA standards. That being said it was very emotional story and I give you credit for going there. There were some audio issues including clicking in the audio. You also had quite a few awkward jump cuts.

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