The Roar Store - ID# 501

Franklin High School

News Package

Entry Description

The new Roar Store is available to students and offers new items.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 2:11 pm - This is a great package; from the B-Roll to the interviews, you have a great grip on telling this interesting story about your school. Plus, what a great school store! For future reference, the interview with Ms. Luttig was framed a bit off, as the back light wasn't helping to light her face nor was she framed appropriately. Shooting from that high angle while someone is sitting in a chair takes away from their authority and power. Keep up the great work!
• 3/5 2:19 pm - Nice beginning. Interviewees should not hold the microphone. Watch doing an interview when they are sitting down especially in a swivel chair. She rocks back and forth. A bit too much camera movement and use a tripod. Well put together.
• 2/27 11:25 am - Interview subjects should never hold the microphone themselves. I think this was a good story and had lots of good facts. However, watch the number of pan and tilt shots you used. I was sometimes a bit dizzy. Use tripod when you can.

Judge 1

Positives: - Nice opening and closing shots! - I liked that you incorporated how the store teaches useful life skills to student employees.

Improvements: - Always looks for visually pleasing background for interviews. I liked that you had a rack of clothes behind the student, but the other half of the screen with the white wall was bland. There also were better options for the staff member's background. - It would be nice to also hear from a student who uses the store.

Judge 2

Positives: nice job on broll- i love that you did pans and moved the camera good job on graphics nice interviews. very informative about the store

Improvements: slow down a little on the broll-- good shots but moved a little to fast over it. would have loved some music on this one!

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