Find Your Exercise - ID# 511

West Chicago

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

There are plenty of reasons not to exercise. But there are just as many reasons to do it. Don't make excuses: find your exercise.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 9:06 pm - Original concept and done very well. Enjoyed how you used multiple subjects to speak to the same subject showing the importance to a lifestyle choice. Composition pretty strong, message very strong. Well done!
• 3/3 12:00 pm - Nicely put together. Tells a positive story and I like you had the people again at the end. Good audio choice and levels.

Judge 1

Positives: Good camera work and I liked hearing each persons story

Improvements: I think less words would be more effective.

Judge 2

Positives: good variety of environments, and some nice moments of candid performance used in the edit

Improvements: could use more variation in camera angles, more cuts to add dynamics to some of the slower sections

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