We are all Supreme - ID# 524

Lake Forest

Documentary

Entry Description

A PORTION of a documentary about the clothing brand Supreme

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/28 5:17 am - Strong opener, poorly framed opening interview, inconsistent audio in interviews, over 65% of the footage used isn’t original and citation of footage is lacking,
• 4/27 7:55 pm - Great open music and open action shot. Good second music piece. Music, pacing are great. Piece is always moving, but not too terribly fast. Lots of file video but it didn't bother me because the pace was steady, the subject matter engaging, and it told a story quite well.
• 4/26 8:04 am - Interviews that you shot look pretty good. Clara might have been edited more and perhaps spread around the piece. Over all, this seems to be too dependent on commercial footage to convey the message.

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