Photograph - ID# 529

Franklin High School
Music Video

Entry Description

A tribute to a grandfather's and grandmother's love.

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 3/3 1:53 pm - Got to use a tripod- moving and tracking shots are just too bumpy without it. Lots of shadows seen on the pictures. This would be a great tribute to the people in the pictures, but as a music video for a general audience it's difficult to relate to. It was a nice job showing a picture, and then taking the picture away and you are at the scene. Or the progession of the pictures themselves was nice. But there is no wow factor- the audience is waiting for a story to be told and for something to happen and it's just pictures. Take extra time to really frame those shots to get the perfect look to each shot.
  • 2/28 12:00 pm - Good concept for a music video and very thought provoking. Camerawork is a little unstable and it might have been even more powerful and captivating if the video included videos of the person in the photos. Another idea would be holding the photos in the locations that they were originally taken.
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