I got you - ID# 520

Lake Forest

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Leading Efforts to support students

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/27 12:58 pm - Editing of the video is fantastic. The camera angles combined with quick cuts builds the anticipation. The soft music and audio mixing was great. Excellent video!
• 3/5 3:12 pm - there were some really nice shots in this, and it is well edited. Really enjoyed the fast intercutting at the end and the pacing of the edit. However, we thought the video would be about how to promote each other in times of stress, but then the infographic came up at the end regarding drugs. Did not see the connection. Great edit!
• 3/2 11:22 am - Don't see the correlation between the final graphic "linking efforts against drugs" and the rest of the video. I was assuming she was stressed out and this video was in promotion of a group supporting students. Shot well though, I liked the cuts between the climbing scenes and other scenes.

Judge 1

Positives: Moves good. Nice variety of camera shots

Improvements: I thought it was going to be a psa about handling pressure but then it was an anti-drug psa? The message could be more clear

Judge 2

Positives: Nice tension build. Good effort, meaningful, insightful and important message.

Improvements: End shot should have placed the camera more from Gracie's vantage point looking down. You put us into her world, now shoot her world from her perspective. Some wide shots of her isolated would have contrasted nicely with all the close ups - which got a bit jumpy in your face feeling.

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