ISABELLA VERGARA - COMMERCIAL - MMEA SUBMISSION 2017 - ID# 53

South Elgin
Commercial

Entry Description

Commercial advertising the generational use and multi-genre music app, Spotify.

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/27 6:56 am - For those who don’t use Spotify, how can you make it clearer a little earlier in the commercial that you’re using Spotify? What is the purpose of the effect on the Spotify logo at the end of this commercial?
  • 3/6 8:39 pm - I like the concept, and I like the opening shot a lot. After that I think that the transitions become a little too much and I think that the shots are too close, and I like close shots. Try to give detail without being on top of the subject it will help make things clearer for the viewer. Good job informing me of the options if I were to use this product.
  • 3/5 11:41 am - The idea was good I just didn’t feel a synergy between the music and what I was seeing. For example when you hit play on the phone, that is when the music should come on. It was hard do know exactly what the commercial was for, earphones etc. or if you were trying to show all the places the music can be used in or the devices it can be played on. In the end I could figure it out but I wasn’t sure what I should be paying attention to while I was watching it. Not a bad idea, just work on the implementation.
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