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New Trier

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Privacy on the Internet is often not thought about by teens. This is a PSA addressing the problem of oversharing.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 9:13 pm - Very well shot and executed! Great use of sound and strong composition and intentional lighting throughout. Very effective and interesting.
• 3/4 2:20 pm - Well shot. I almost thought that I was watching a horror movie. I'm a little confused about what I should do. Should I watch what I post or should I not go on those sites at all? The audio says watch what you post but the graphics make it seem that I should avoid those sites.

Judge 1

Positives: Some good camera angles used

Improvements: I think the message of oversharing could be more prominent

Judge 2

Positives: Nice build up of tension. Good use of multiple different shots to control tempo. Solid work.

Improvements: You need a more solid ending. A splat of sorts. A moment with the talent that says "enough". One defined moment. A hand over the lens with a face saying no more? Talent looking into lens as her face expresses remorse and image digitizes?

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