Making Every Day Count - ID# 540

Maine East

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A mother and his son don’t get along well due to the son’s careless and selfish behavior. But after a devastating accident, neglect quickly turns to regret.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 9:08 am - Nice use of locations/props in the hospital, like the birds on the ceiling.
• 3/5 8:45 pm - Good visuals and audio. Effective use of music. Perhaps the video could be a bit shorter and still get the point across. Not quite clear what happened in the “accident.” Of course you can’t really film a real accident, but there might be a more effective way to show/suggest what happened.

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