Protocol Green - ID# 542

Glenbrook North
Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

In the year 2116, two men confront their reality as the day comes to change it.

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/28 12:07 pm - Your piece features a strong story and excellent cinematography. I really enjoyed the way in which you treated this space. Your camera and sequencing of shots enclosed the viewer in this space with your actors. The editing is quite fluid and effectively paced. Your story kept my attention, and the manner in which you developed your characters made them authentic. The acting in this piece is quite good. In fact, this piece possessed the best performances of any film in this category.
  • 3/7 9:07 am - Cool calendar. Too long of a setup for conclusion at end.
  • 3/5 8:45 pm - I really like how you took the time to build characters here. The actors did a really good job. All technical aspects, well done. Very effective use of visual effects.
Judge 1

Positives: Effective story build and reveal. Good use of special effects and excellent teleportation scene. Good acting.

Improvements: Lighting was too dark.

Judge 2

Positives: Shot framing done nicely; lighting done well for dark space and then contrasted and executed well at end for narrative cohesion

Improvements: Sound difficult to decipher at points; camera movement sometimes distracting

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