LAUREN YACCINO - PSA - MMEA SUBMISSION 2017 - ID# 55

South Elgin

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Entry Description

The pitfalls of driving while texting styled with a classic arcade game feel.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 9:26 pm - Great concept, well executed. Composition is very strong as is the use of sound throughout. Give it a title though!
• 3/4 3:03 pm - The title should give us an indication what the video is about. Student and school names should not be in the title. Neat concept. Good use of music, sound effects, and graphics. Good editing, especially at end with crash.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice camera work and original story idea

Improvements: If it's a classic video game feel then maybe some classic video game music would work well

Judge 2

Positives: great idea and the video-game theme was well-executed. love the graphics and editorial touches you added.

Improvements: small point, but I feel like the game score should have gone lower faster when she actually started typing while driving - and maybe the music could have changed and there could have been a few more cuts as the crash approached to increase tension.

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