Borderline - ID# 554

Maine East
Movie Trailer

Entry Description

Three kids. One evil teacher. When they are on the brink of failing a class with too much riding on their grades, the Jock and the Nerd have no choice but to turn to the Cheater. How far will they go to get the grade?

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/27 5:18 pm - Good use of voice-overs to set up the trailer. Good composition. I thought the music choices worked well. I liked the "Harrison Ford" line.
  • 3/22 7:44 am - The various shots shown panning are very smooth and done well. The framing in each scene is well done, the actors are given just enough headroom that no one gets awkwardly cut out. The natural sound, however, in a few shots, is rather high and takes away from the dialogue.
  • 3/6 3:01 pm - The concept and the storytelling was interesting. The editing was strong and helped serve the story in a positive way. The rest of the execution was lacking polish. There were many shots that contained soft focus or were underexposed in key spots where action was taking place. This distracted from the storytelling. The ADR was pretty good but noticeable and did not seem necessary. Recording clean audio during filming would have helped a lot.
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