Finish What You Started - ID# 556

Mundelein

Music Video

Entry Description

With only her best interest for her ex, Erin tries desperately to save him from getting hurt from his new girlfriend.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/27 7:52 am - Good use of color grading to help tell a fairly complex story. But maybe spend a little more time developing the characters and less time having characters check their phones. Give me a reason to root for the protagonist.

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