Recent alumnus spotlight - ID# 558

Southland College Prep

Documentary

Entry Description

TNN reaches out to a recent alumnus during his first semester at a military academy.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 10:17 pm - I had to disqualify this entry because it was :11 over the 5:00 time limit. You did a really good job of finding relevant visuals for something that you clearly could not shoot yourself. This could have been cut down as it gets repetitive but their is a really interesting story here and if you cut it down, it could be very interesting.
• 3/6 10:10 pm - Nice job finding all of the broll to really tell the story visually. It was distracting when he would pop on and off, but nice job on cutting down his audio to tell the story. Cutting this down would really help keep the audiences' attention as he repeats himself and goes into a lot of unnecessary detail.

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