A dinner for Mom - ID# 553

Mundelein

News Package

Entry Description

News package about a football dinner where the players take the time to honor their mothers. Note: Our school has only one hand held mic and it was not returned on time from the previous person the night of the event. I am aware the audio is poor because it is from the on camera microphone. We did our best with what we had. Thanks for your understanding.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 11:47 am - The angle of this story was creative and emotional. While I understand the issue with the microphone this impacted the final piece. The interviews you did conduct were powerful and well edited. Wish there were transitions between all the soundbites to enhance the storytelling.
• 3/5 4:07 pm - Neat story, but the audio quality is not good. It would have been better to use a microphone. B-roll is good. I like the very human detail of the subject who lost his mother and how that impacts his understanding of this event.

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