Who Are We? - ID# 569

Glenbrook North

Natural Audio News Package

Entry Description

This is a feature on who we are as a school community using the sights, sounds and voices of our students.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/15 3:01 pm - Great pace to the edit. Great solid story. Exposure and white balance needed work. Music was distracting at moments. Great composition of shots and use of different angles. Loved the use of movement in the shots!
• 3/7 11:39 am - Well done, but there was music throughout.
• 3/1 3:32 pm - The music is distracting, do not use music with lyrics, it takes away from the story. I like your variety of shots, and I think that it helps to tell you story. the framing of your interviews is well done, and your video matches your audio.

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