Animation Breakdown - Jade - ID# 571
Libertyville
Demonstration
Entry Description
Here is my Process for the Production of a Trailer to an upcoming animated short; Jade. I describe my process for creating assets, rigging, animating, and visual effects.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/7 11:33 am - Your animation work is clearly pretty amazing and your knowledge and skill impressive. However, this tells us what you did rather than providing clear instruction to the viewer. Perhaps consider taking only one specific element and demonstrate that step by step. As produced, this did not work effectively in this category. But keep up your great work in animaiton!
- 3/7 10:45 am - You provided a very thorough explanation of your animation processes for Jade. But this was more of an overview as opposed to a true demonstration show that takes us step-by-step through a specific process. This played more as a DVD extra than a demonstrated task. Also, the audio quality of your voice over was rather tinny and thin throughout the piece. Additionally, we should have seen your face in the opening shots of the demonstration show. It would have connected your audience more to you and the subsequent activity. Overall, this was a fascinating watch, but it didn't quite match the categorical requirements of a demonstration show according to our festival rubric.
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