What is your magnum opus? - ID# 572

Mundelein

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

This project was a prop and line assignment, rather than make a silly story I decided to turn it into a serious narrative

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/28 9:55 am - I enjoyed watching your piece and the insights shared in your narration. This piece does not follow the conventions of a traditional narrative. Plot and character development are not present to the degree they should be. Your piece also uses material shot before March of 2016.
• 3/7 9:06 am - Footage not from 2016-2017 time frame.
• 3/5 11:10 am - Great collection of clips. Meaningful script. Good selection of music.

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