Love at first sight - ID# 573
Mundelein
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
Sometimes you find love in places you are not expecting.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/7 10:18 am - Pretty funny when both students touched each other's hand. Could have used a few more shots.
Judge 1
Positives: This was lots of fun. Especially loved the turn the story took from an otherwise familiar narrative. Nice job. Also important to note — nice acting. Hard to react to narration. All in all, I encourage young filmmakers to be simple -- it allows you to really luxuriate in the little moments. Nice!
Improvements: Audio was a little rough in patches but hell, field production is tough. Love the simplicity of this story but it needed to be stepped out a little more at the end. Film ended abruptly. Bad example, maybe the girl of both their dreams (at the start) can’t seem to get their attention at the end. Just something to give us a little more time to revel in the two dudes discovery.
Judge 2
Positives: Funny...ended at the right spot
Improvements: The voices in their heads needed a different sound and were kind of choppy edits...a little distracting from a clever story
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