Bucket List - ID# 589

Glenbrook South

Seven Day Challenge

Entry Description

Three students attempt to spend twenty-four hours in their high school. However, their fun is interrupted when they realize that they are not alone.

Recent Teacher Comments

Judge 1

Positives: Great use of music and sound effects to add to the creepy tone! It made it feel like a true horror film. The actors were all really great! Especially the way that the two boys contrasted each other in their quest for the girl - they did a good job of reacting to one another's moves and kept a nice balance between friendly and competitive.

Improvements: The climax of the film fell quite flat for me. The "evil" custodian shows up with a stapler, scares them and kind of chases them, but then they wake up the next morning and everything is fine? It would have been nice to have something more severe happen, or have more of a reaction from them before the film ended. Where did the other guy go? After he leaves the library when the custodian appears, we never seen him again and its never acknowledged that he's gone.

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Judge 3

Positives: Liked the song choice and how it fit well into the narrative.

Improvements: Plot makes no sense. The part at the beginning where the guys comment on the attractiveness of the girl had creepy timing.

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